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Stars are quiet.

They don't say a word.

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Snow whispers when it falls.

But so quietly no-one hears.

...

And like them, I am also quiet.

No-one is listening.

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I lay myself down to the frozen ground.

Earth is sleeping.

Having one eye still open waiting for spring.

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I have both of my eyes closed, but I am listening.

I hear nothing.

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I start moving my hands slowly.

Snow rustles.

...

I notice my legs moving too.

Not in sync with my hands.

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I made a snow angel. But I don't stand up to look at what I have made.

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I keep lying inside the angel.

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I am where no-one but the stars can see me.

And there.

There I am an angel.

...

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An angel just by myself.

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The cold pinches my cheeks but I feel warm.

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When I finally stand up and start leaving home step by step it is already dark.

Fairies start lighting up lanterns to the tree branches.

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As I am walking home in the deep snow, I have no wings.

As I am walking home in the deep snow, I don't have a beautiful gown on me.

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But

I need no gowns as I am always beautiful to those who love me.

I need no wings because there is nothing I need to flee from.

In the end.

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Cold stops pinching and starts tickling.

I smile and when I can't resist anymore, I burst into a soft laugh.

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I am no angel,

But I am a girl who is loved.

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May God give wings to someone who have something to flee from.

May God give gowns to those who don't have people who can see inside them.

...

Snow starts to sing a soothing melody.

Wind blows softly. And aides my way home.

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When I get home, I sit by the fire place, drink cocoa and give a hug to my mother.
Snow.
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karicom333 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
This is amazing! It's so beautiful!!
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TenshinekoOwO Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you.
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Mechanical2127 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
this is so wonderful!
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TenshinekoOwO Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you. You know I have other writings too that you might or might not like.
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silvermoon442 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful! :D
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TenshinekoOwO Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you. Would you mind telling what part you like the most? Why is it beautiful? And by the way I was listening to this [link] while writing it.
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silvermoon442 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! I love the beginning, the first 14 lines. The serene and still scene is just gorgeous. I love the rest of it, but there's motion too and that sweet stillness was just a gorgeous beginning. And my, that is a BEAUTIFUL song! :D
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TenshinekoOwO Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you. Well. Actually it started off as just a still scene that I had thought out because I felt like just writing something. The strongest thought was just the feeling of snow. So the rest wasn't thought out beforehand and I guess you can see it.

But I have this habit that my poems have to have somewhat clear ending so I continued it after just the still thing.

But I am glad that you still love the rest of it too.
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silvermoon442 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! that's cool. I can't write like that |D I prefer to draw. That's why I'm on here XD especially manga owo
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TenshinekoOwO Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I used to like drawing more too but then I got into drawn arts school and felt incompetent compared to the all great artists and maybe that's why I now write more.

So maybe the poem butterfly will start sending secrets by the hum of it's wings to your ears some day too.

Though poems come when they come. I can't force them out.
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